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We wear our heartbreak and heartache
Like badges, like medals of honor,
Like battle wounds earned fighting
For what we believed in. We wear them
Proudly, to the right of our chests
Where our hearts used to be
Before reality burst our dreams
At the seams- We wear them because
It's all we've got left,
The closest thing we still have
To love.
We are changed, our separate yearnings
And beliefs lifting into the air
And colliding softly. Every life
Is a missed connection, lacking direction,
Amongst the white noise and static
And lonely crowds.
We never knew, we knever knew
That emptiness could be this heavy,
And we want out. We sullenly
Stare down at the ground
Not because we are upset, but because
We wonder what the world would look like
If we let its weight fall off
Of our shoulders and shatter.
We are young, and we are blameless,
And we weep with the stars
Because we bear the scars
Of what it's like to be hated
By those who should have loved us.
By those who should have cared for us.
By those who shouldn't ever have left us
On our own and alone when we needed
Them most.
Maybe with them, it wouldn't be this way.
We wouldn't be just another lost generation.
We are Generation Y asking the question of why
And being left to answer it by ourselves.
We want the truth, and the truth is,
No one knows the truth. And so we wander,
Lost of unknown love.
But we'll have plenty of time,
Because we know we'll never die- because
We are young, and we are shameless,
And we are always wanting more
And being left with less.
Like badges, like medals of honor,
Like battle wounds earned fighting
For what we believed in. We wear them
Proudly, to the right of our chests
Where our hearts used to be
Before reality burst our dreams
At the seams- We wear them because
It's all we've got left,
The closest thing we still have
To love.
We are changed, our separate yearnings
And beliefs lifting into the air
And colliding softly. Every life
Is a missed connection, lacking direction,
Amongst the white noise and static
And lonely crowds.
We never knew, we knever knew
That emptiness could be this heavy,
And we want out. We sullenly
Stare down at the ground
Not because we are upset, but because
We wonder what the world would look like
If we let its weight fall off
Of our shoulders and shatter.
We are young, and we are blameless,
And we weep with the stars
Because we bear the scars
Of what it's like to be hated
By those who should have loved us.
By those who should have cared for us.
By those who shouldn't ever have left us
On our own and alone when we needed
Them most.
Maybe with them, it wouldn't be this way.
We wouldn't be just another lost generation.
We are Generation Y asking the question of why
And being left to answer it by ourselves.
We want the truth, and the truth is,
No one knows the truth. And so we wander,
Lost of unknown love.
But we'll have plenty of time,
Because we know we'll never die- because
We are young, and we are shameless,
And we are always wanting more
And being left with less.
Literature
Inexorable
Consumed by sin.
Devoured by t i m e.
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Psalm for the South
Momma gave me a quilt when I left home
so I could lie me down in green pastures,
jus' like her black book says.
I learned to read
in a town where the churches got porches
jus' like everybody else.
Taught myself astronomy
with cogon grass ticklin my bare legs an'feet
an'ticks on the backsa my knees.
I couldn'a shown you
the long necklace a' stars
people say is a dragon,
but I could hunt down rabbits n'hazelnuts
on their way to Heaven.
Since I left
I seen long plains a' steel buildins
that crowd out the sky
an'shine their own stars.
Grandaddy Solomon still sings to me in my sleep
in Grandma's ole wicker rockin chair,
still r
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infinitesimal.
you'll never notice me.
i am silent like the swans
you love, floating on the water
in pairs, necks intertwining.
"that is love," you sigh,
running your pianist fingers
through your hair.
"if only i had someone to be
my swan-mate."
you'll never notice me.
i adore you as naturally as
the sun shines,
as the wind blows,
as the seeds grow.
you say,
"i just want one nice girl
who will let me treat her like a princess."
please, call me cinderella.
you'll never notice me.
you grab my hand and pull me into
a waltz. you pay for my dinner,
you take me with you on adventures.
we speak to the wind
and yell when it's silent.
we dan
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Yeah. I think it needs some work- but then, what piece of mine doesn't?
It's kind of a spoken word slam poem, just because it sounds much better when read aloud
-Titles, as always?
- Does it flow?
- Seem cliched?
- How's the ending?
Any other comments, suggestions, etc. are appreciated beyond words, of course
It's kind of a spoken word slam poem, just because it sounds much better when read aloud
-Titles, as always?
- Does it flow?
- Seem cliched?
- How's the ending?
Any other comments, suggestions, etc. are appreciated beyond words, of course
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It flowed fine and the flow was aided by your word play throughout (which i thoroughly enjoyed).
Not cliched in the slightest and a topic that i think every writer should explore at some point or another.
The ending is a thorough conclusion which tends to be perfect for slam poetry; that along with your word play makes this a very strong piece for its purpose.
Not cliched in the slightest and a topic that i think every writer should explore at some point or another.
The ending is a thorough conclusion which tends to be perfect for slam poetry; that along with your word play makes this a very strong piece for its purpose.